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The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.
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The pie chart illustrates information about how UAE authorities spent the public
budget
 in ten sectors in a specific year.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 social security received the highest percentage of expenditure from
UAE
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budget
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while
the
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transport was the lowest percentage of expenditure. Looking at the chart in more detail, the highest proportion of
UAE
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budget
 was allocated for social security at 100
billion
 AED and followed by health and personal social services was 53 AED
billion
. The third sector was education at 38
billion
 AED ,and both of
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others
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 expenditures and debt interest was have the same value funding at 23
billion
 AED. The fifth sector was
the
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defence at 22
billion
 ADE. Regarding
others
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 sectors, the value of funding from
public
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the public
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budget
 for law and order and housing, heritage , and
environment
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the environment
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 was 17 and 15
billion
 AED , respectively. The industry, agriculture and employment and transport
was
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 the lowest
secors
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sectors
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 received funds
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13 and 9
billion
 AED , respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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