The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.
The pie chart illustrates information about how UAE authorities spent the public
budget
in ten sectors in a specific year.
Overall
, it is clear that
social security received the highest percentage of expenditure from UAE
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the UAE
budget
, while
the
transport was the lowest percentage of expenditure.
Looking at the chart in more detail, the highest proportion of Correct article usage
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UAE
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the UAE
budget
was allocated for social security at 100 billion
AED and followed by health and personal social services was 53 AED billion
. The third sector was education at 38 billion
AED ,and both of Correct article usage
the others
others
expenditures and debt interest was have the same value funding at 23 Correct quantifier usage
other
billion
AED. The fifth sector was the
defence at 22 Correct article usage
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sectors, the value of funding from Correct quantifier usage
other
public
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the public
budget
for law and order and housing, heritage , and environment
was 17 and 15 Add an article
the environment
billion
AED , respectively. The industry, agriculture and employment and transport was
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received funds Correct your spelling
sectors
scores
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billion
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