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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture. What are your opinions on this?

#people #language #countries #loss #culture
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, diversity is what makes the world a fantastic place to live. My personal belief is that, is that if every nation of the world were
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 to use the same international language code, diversity could be affected.
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, nations should keep using their own languages, dialects and any other form they have to
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, diversity should never
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