The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement
Some
people
have an opinion that in the future, human health is presumably lower than the current condition Use synonyms
due to
various reasons, Linking Words
such
as technological development and lifestyle has changed a lot in the Linking Words
last
few decades.
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To begin
with, internet usage has increased significantly in the Linking Words
last
10 years, and Linking Words
this
phenomenon has led to more Linking Words
people
using it for playing a game or social media to relieve their stress after working hours. It is true that these Use synonyms
activities
are useful for building self-confidence, improving creativity and expressing our ideas. Use synonyms
However
, spending many hours on the internet make Linking Words
people
reduce time to take sports Use synonyms
activities
, Use synonyms
for example
, taking physical exercise and playing badminton, tennis, and futsal, which is essential to attain work-life balance. Linking Words
Besides
, taking various sports Linking Words
activities
will boost the human immune and Use synonyms
this
condition will lead to less vulnerable to viruses and germ attacks that cause many illnesses to keep our body healthy. A survey conducted by The Jakarta Post in 2021 toward internet users showed that only 5% of respondents carry out these Linking Words
activities
to keep their bodies healthy.
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On the other hand
, consuming fast Linking Words
food
becomes a trend in urban areas, where Use synonyms
people
almost have no time to cook for themselves so it becomes an alternative meal amid their busy working Use synonyms
activities
. These types of Use synonyms
food
can be easily found in large cities, Use synonyms
such
as King Burger, Kentucky Fried Chicken, and Pizza Hut, which is the main cause of illnesses, Linking Words
such
as obesity, diabetes, and cholesterol. In the USA, the consumption of these fast Linking Words
food
has led to more than 10% of those above 40 years old undertaking medical checks regularly at the hospital and making them spend a large amount of money.
In conclusion, I agree that in the future, Use synonyms
people
’s health is likely to be lower than present condition because they spend less time to take sport Use synonyms
activities
and more consumption of fast Use synonyms
food
which make them vulnerable to various illnesses.Use synonyms
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