Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a ppositive or negative development?

Recently, technology is getting more advanced day by day. Children often change how to spend time and enjoy themselves at home. There are some children who spend hours using their
phones
every day. I am going to talk about
this
issue. The reason why they spend hours using their
phones
is that they can not only contact
people
like we used to do on our
phones
, but
also
you can play
games
, watch films and read books. Old
phones
had features for calling and texting, but the latest
phones
can do anything you want.
For example
, if you get bored with social media
such
as Instagram or Twitter, you can play
games
or watch anime and films on your phone. That may keep you on screen for ages. On the one hand, there are advantages to
this
problem.
Firstly
, you might get a job playing
games
or something that relates to technology.
For instance
, recently, there are some
people
who work as professional gamers, so you could get a job playing
games
.
In addition
, if you get used to technology, that may help you to get a job.
Secondly
, there are many entertainments on
phones
. So you might find something you like or are fascinated by.
This
can assist you find things that you like to do. I found there is an alumnus who is a fashion designer and I decided to study fashion design at a university
then
.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of
this
problem. If they use their
phones
for too long and don’t talk to anyone. They will lose the ability to communicate with
people
in person.
For example
, there are often
people
who prefer texting to calling.
This
is making a lot of miscommunications.
Moreover
, their eye sights will be worse for looking at screens for a long time. Some children look at their
phones
right before they sleep. That causes having bad eye sights and wearing glasses forever. In conclusion, there are more negative aspects of
this
development. In my opinion, You should have a limit to using your
phones
and have more time to communicate with
people
in person. Those can help your mental problem and make your life better.
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