The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.

The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.
The table illustrates the amount of money teachers working in secondary and high school earned in 5 different nations in the year 2009.
It is clear that
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the salary paid to teachers in Luxembourg was the highest throughout the working period. It took only nearly a decade for masters in Australia and Denmark to reach the maximum wage but
then
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it remained the same after 15
years
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. Japanese and Korean mentors
also
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witnessed a considerable increase in their earnings. As can be seen, Australian professors did not receive high payment at
first,
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which was only 28.000$.
However
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, the figure for that rose rapidly to a maximum of 48.000$ within a decade and stayed unchanged 15
years
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later.
Likewise
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, the starting salary for instructors in Denmark was 45.000$ and after 8
years
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, it climbed to 54.000$ and
then
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stabilized.
By contrast
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, trainers in Luxembourg was the most well-paid as their earning was 80.000$ in the beginning .After 30
years
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, the total of that soared to 132.000$.
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,
although
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it took Japanese and Korean teachers over 30
years
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to achieve the highest salary, the sum of their earnings still grew significantly.

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