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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person´s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #person´s #culture #character #choice #clothes
In the modern
world
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,world
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people
 have a vast variety of different kinds of products and meals. They can choose their nutrition by many factors like price, taste and health benefits.
However
, not everybody considers the
last
 factor and
prefer
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prefers
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 to eat a lot of harmful, but delicious and frequently cheap
food
. Consequentially, they become fat and have many health problems. Generally,
people
 eat fatting
food
 in restaurants and
caffes
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cafes
 or buy it in supermarkets.
Accordingly
, some
people
 believe that the main way to reduce consumption of
unhealty
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unhealthy
food
 is to increase the price of it. In my opinion,
this
 is a quite good solution
of
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to
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 the problem, but not perfect.
Rise
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A rise
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 in prices would push customers to choose alternative nutrition and
finally
 get rid of their habits to eat plenty of oily, sweet and unnatural meals and snacks.
On the other hand
, in
reality
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 there are many controversial points of that method.
For instance
, unjustified price
increase
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increases
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 might cause protests and some illegal institutions providing cheap and probably poor quality fast
food
.
Likewise
,
decrease
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a decrease
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 in demand
of
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for
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 fast
food
 would force plenty of various
enterprices
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enterprises
 to be closed or substitute their goods. Anyway, these actions would not be able to fully solve the issue of excess weight in all suffering
people
. Fatting
food
 is not the only reason
of
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for
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 becoming fat. It may
caused
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be caused
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 by diseases or
passive
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a passive
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 lifestyle.
To sum up
, I think that the government may create additional taxes on harmful
food
 or something else, but it does not make sense without any other measures.
People
 have to realize
themselves
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apply
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what they consume and take care of their health.
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