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The pie charts below show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. Types of Music Media Used - 1990 Types of Music Media Used - 2000 Types of Music Media Used - 2010

The pie charts below show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. Types of Music Media Used - 1990 Types of Music Media Used - 2000 Types of Music Media Used - 2010
The three pie charts reveal the categories of
music
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media
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 used in 1990, 2000 and 2010 and the percentage changes
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music
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media
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 in these three time periods.
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, compact disk (
CD
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) retained its appearance in the
music
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media
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market
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, cassette shrank drastically from 25% in 1990 to zero from 2000 onwards and
vinyl
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record
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 was much more popular to
use
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 in 1990 compared to the latter periods.
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CD
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The CD
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 started to become popular and achieved a dominant position in 1990 which recorded more than half of the whole in the
music
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media
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market
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. It reached its peak in 2000 with 95% of usage, nearly all
music
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media
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 was in
this
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 format.
Then
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, the percentage of
CD
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use
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decline
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declined
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until
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to
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 35% in 2010.
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Vinyl
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The vinyl
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record
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 was adopted by 20% of users in the
market
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 in 1990 and nobody had shown their interest to
use
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it
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them
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 in 2000.
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, a minority group of people preferred
vinyl
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record
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records
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 in 2010
and
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which
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 resulted in 5% of the
market
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. Digital audio recorded a jump from 2000 at 5% to 60% in 2010. In summary,
cassette
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the cassette
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 had become outdated in the
use
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 of
music
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media
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 after 2000, and
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vinyl
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the vinyl
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record
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 was less popular compared to 1990 simultaneously.
CD
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 retained a status in the
music
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media
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market
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 but it could not compete with digital audio in 2010.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words music, media, cd, market, vinyl, record, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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