The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The line graph gives information about the proportion of inhabitants aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three kinds of disparate nations (
USA
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,
Sweden
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,
Japan
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). Units are measured in cents.
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, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of the population ages 65 years and over in
Sweden
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and
Japan
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increased steadily,
while
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experienced a significant drop by the end of the period. At the start of the period,
Japan
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had the lowest percentage of the population from 1960 to 2020, and in the following ,years
Japan
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will overtake
Sweden
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and the
USA
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. With regards to the highest percentage of the
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population, it began at around 5 per cent and
then
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with the same percentage until the 1980s. Inhabitants started dramatically growing after 2000 and
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it is expected to increase by about 25 per cent, which replaces
Sweden
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and
USA
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in the future years.
Whereas
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and the
USA
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were growing in the same way until the 2000s. There was a big difference between 2000 and now.
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there was predicting that it will rise in the same way in the next decade.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, sweden, japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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