The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph gives information about the proportion of inhabitants aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three kinds of disparate nations (
USA
,
Sweden
,
Japan
). Units are measured in cents.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of the population ages 65 years and over in
Sweden
and
Japan
increased steadily,
while
Japan
experienced a significant drop by the end of the period. At the start of the period,
Japan
had the lowest percentage of the population from 1960 to 2020, and in the following ,years
Japan
will overtake
Sweden
and the
USA
. With regards to the highest percentage of the
Japan
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population, it began at around 5 per cent and
then
with the same percentage until the 1980s. Inhabitants started dramatically growing after 2000 and
then
it is expected to increase by about 25 per cent, which replaces
Sweden
and
USA
in the future years.
Whereas
Sweden
and the
USA
were growing in the same way until the 2000s. There was a big difference between 2000 and now.
Likewise
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there was predicting that it will rise in the same way in the next decade.
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