Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is argued that, nowadays, the major environmental issue is losing some specific types of creatures and

vegetations

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,

whereas

others believe that there are many crucial environmental issues which we need to be aware of them.

Although

preserving particular species matters, I personally agree with the latter view and in

this

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I will discuss both sides of

this

statement. On the one hand, the reason why many people argue that losing some particular species

are

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the most important nature issue would be the importance of preserving the cultural background of humanity.

This

means, by protecting them in the forests and wildlife, we can keep the history in today’s world rather than talking about them in the historical books without even knowing

how

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what

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exactly they looked like.

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,

dianosures

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dinosaurs

diagnoses

extinction

are

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one example of not caring about the environment and letting them

to

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go

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extinct.

On the other hand

, there are two main causes why some individuals believe that there are more crucial environmental issues.

Firstly

, they are likely to be concerned about the impact of deforestation.

This

is because

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many large cities, the majority of the trees are

cutting

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down

due to

the construction of skyscrapers to improve the shortage

houses

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of houses

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.

As a result

, there are many negative impacts on the environment

such

as air pollution resulting in some health problems.

Secondly

, extreme weather

which

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is the result of climate change.

This

means that many actions of big factories

leads

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lead

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to an increase in temperature and

that is

why many nations are facing heatwaves in recent years.

To sum up

,

although

many people believe that preserving particular species is an environmental necessity, I feel that there are many other vital issues related to nature that we need to consider

such

as deforestation and extreme weather.