Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is argued that, nowadays, the major environmental issue is losing some specific types of creatures and
vegetations
, Fix the agreement mistake
vegetation
whereas
others believe that there are many crucial environmental issues which we need to be aware of them. Although
preserving particular species matters, I personally agree with the latter view and in this
essay
I will discuss both sides of Add a comma
,essay
this
statement.
On the one hand, the reason why many people argue that losing some particular species are
the most important nature issue would be the importance of preserving the cultural background of humanity. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
This
means, by protecting them in the forests and wildlife, we can keep the history in today’s world rather than talking about them in the historical books without even knowing how
exactly they looked like. Correct word choice
what
For instance
, dianosures
extinction Correct your spelling
dinosaurs
diagnoses
are
one example of not caring about the environment and letting them Correct subject-verb agreement
is
to
extinct.
Correct your spelling
go
On the other hand
, there are two main causes why some individuals believe that there are more crucial environmental issues. Firstly
, they are likely to be concerned about the impact of deforestation. This
is because in
many large cities, the majority of the trees are Add the comma(s)
,in
cutting
down Wrong verb form
cut
due to
the construction of skyscrapers to improve the shortage houses
. Change preposition
of houses
As a result
, there are many negative impacts on the environment such
as air pollution resulting in some health problems. Secondly
, extreme weather which
is the result of climate change. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
means that many actions of big factories leads
to an increase in temperature and Change the verb form
lead
that is
why many nations are facing heatwaves in recent years.
To sum up
, although
many people believe that preserving particular species is an environmental necessity, I feel that there are many other vital issues related to nature that we need to consider such
as deforestation and extreme weather.Submitted by nastaran.moghadasi on
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