The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram depicts the life cycle of a species of a
large fish called the Correct article usage
apply
salmon
.
Salmon
has three stages of growing up. First as
a small fish Correct your spelling
is
that is
called fry which is approximately 3 to 8cm small. The second stage will be called as
smolt which is 12 to 15cm small. Change preposition
apply
Then
the third and last
stage would be of
adult Change preposition
apply
salmon
and it is size would approximately
70 to 76cm.
Add a missing verb
be approximately
Salmon
fishes usually lay their eggs under reels which has small stones under it
and at that time they are called Correct pronoun usage
them
as
fry, when they are approximately 5 to 6 months old, they Change preposition
apply
slow
Replace the word
slowly
move
to Add the particle
to move
lower
river which Add an article
the lower
a lower
are
fast flowing and by that time smolt reaches to 4-year-old fish. After they grow a little more which is 70 to 76cm, adult Change the verb form
is
salmon
shift to open
sea and by that time they would approximately reach 5 years.Add an article
the open
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, cm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
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