The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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diagram depicts the life cycle of a species of

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large fish called the

salmon

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Salmon

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has three stages of growing up. First

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a small fish

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called fry which is approximately 3 to 8cm small. The second stage will be called

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smolt which is 12 to 15cm small.

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the third and

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stage would be

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adult

salmon

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and it is size would

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70 to 76cm.

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fishes usually lay their eggs under reels which has small stones under

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and at that time they are called

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fry, when they are approximately 5 to 6 months old, they

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move

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to

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the lower

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river which

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fast flowing and by that time smolt reaches to 4-year-old fish. After they grow a little more which is 70 to 76cm, adult

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shift to

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sea and by that time they would approximately reach 5 years.