Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)

It is undeniable that nowadays

people

have to travel by

cars

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or

motorcycles

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to go to their workplaces. Sometimes, vehicle accidents might occur along the

roads

.

Whereas

,

people

think the most efficient way to reduce

this

harm is by setting the required

age

for

drivers

of both cars and motorbikes.

However

, I would strongly agree that these rules should be entirely necessary to improve

safety

on the

roads

, despite some

people

at a certain

age

losing their benefits. Every action should have a regulation to be followed,

therefore

, before

the

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drivers

initially

drive on the

roads

, they must pass the

drivers

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driver's

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license's test first. To understand all of the situations that might occur in their ways, and be able to avoid the accident.

For example

, a definition of the signs, How to drive inside and outside the city, and so on. All of the rules should be strictly followed for your own

safety

and other

peoples

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.

In

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the

results

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result

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of

this

process,

people

who took the course are allowed to prevent some accidents.

Additionally

,

adulthood

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usually use the road more than childhood because of their routine to work and traveling.

For instance

, employees that are mostly over 20 years old will drive to their company at least

for

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15-20 days a month. They will remember all of the rules to prevent illegal actions.

While

the students who are under 20 years old barely take a ride by themselves to their school.

Moreover

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they might provide some driving

behavior

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that is

against the law because they are often used to driving to their destination. In conclusion, improving road

safety

is provided by limiting the minimum

age

for

drivers

.

This

is the absolute most effective choice. Limited the

age

for which driving

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cars and motorbikes ensures the

safety

of other

peoples

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people

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who use the same

roads

as them.