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The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart depicts the highest spending on travel in 2014 from the top ten
countries
. Those top ten
countries
 are China,
United
Correct article usage
the United
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 States, Germany,
United
Correct article usage
the United
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 Kingdom, Singapore, South Korea, Hong Kong, India, Malaysia and Taiwan. China is spending the highest number of money on travelling, which is more than 100
billion
USD
.
On the
Change preposition
The
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 second number is
United
Correct article usage
the United
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 States of America which is spending approximately more than 80
billion
USD
. Germany is
also
 spending the same amount of money as America on travelling which is more than 80
billion
USD
. After that comes
United
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the United
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 Kingdom which is spending less than 60
billion
USD
. Singapore is spending way less than the top 4
countries
, but it has almost reached more than 20
billion
USD
. South Korea is only spending 20
billion
USD
in
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on
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 travelling and
same
Correct article usage
the same
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 for Hong Kong as well.
Countries
 like India, Malaysia and Taiwan are spending way less
then
Replace the word
than
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 20
billion
USD
. In conclusion, these
countries
 are spending
some
Correct determiner usage
a
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 good amount of money on travelling.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, billion, usd with synonyms.
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