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The chart below shows the number of British citizens who emigrated to three countries in three periods of time

The chart below shows the number of British citizens who emigrated to three countries in three periods of time
The bar chart illustrates how many people emigrated from Britain to
Australia
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,
Spain
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, and
Canada
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 in 2000, 2005 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that
Australia
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 was the most popular destination over time, but
while
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Canada
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 took more British
emigrants
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 than
Spain
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 in 2000, their positions had reversed by 2010. In fact, all countries saw a general increase, with the exception of
Canada
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. It should be
also
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 noted that 2005 was the year when most people emigrated. Most British citizens chose
Australia
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 as their place for emigration. The number of
emigrants
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 to
Australia
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, which stood at roughly 45,000 in 2000, rose to 70,000 in 2005 and
then
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 decreased slightly in 2010 to amount to 60,000.
Likewise
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,
Spain
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 welcomed approximately 15,000 British citizens in 2000 and, following the same pattern as
Australia
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,
this
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 number soared to 50,000 in 2005, but
then
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 plummeted to 20,000 in 2010.
In contrast
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, the number of
emigrants
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 to
Canada
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, which stood at 30,000 in 2000, fell steadily to 20,000 in 2005 and
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dropped to 10,000 by 2010.
As a result
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, despite accepting nearly twice as many
emigrants
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 as
Spain
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 in 2000,
Canada
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 ended as the least popular destination in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, spain, canada, emigrants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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