The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.
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The table shows the ten
countries
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with the highest fuel costs and provides a breakdown of average monthly earnings and expenditure on
petrol
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. Of the ten
countries
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, those in northern Europe have the highest
income
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with Norwegians and the Swedish earning the most.
In contrast
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, there are only two
non European
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non-European
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countries
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on the table, Turkey and
Eritrea
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, and they have the lowest
income
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with people in
Eritrea
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earning on average approximately a tenth that of those in Norway, the highest at $4329.07. It is
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interesting to note that there is very little variation in the amount of money spent on
petrol
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and that
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does not seem to correlate to location or
income
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.
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,
expendature
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expenditure
expenditures
in Norway and Turkey is very similar ($319.85 and $315.96 respectively) and in Sweden and
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Eritrea
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,Eritrea
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it is identical at $275. In summary, there is a huge disparity in
income
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in the listed
countries
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but very little difference in how much of
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is spent on
petrol
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.
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means that there is a huge discrepancy in the percentage of
income
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spent on
petrol
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with Norway spending 7.4% of their
income
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on fuel compared with over sixty
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in
Eritrea
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, petrol, income, eritrea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • petrol
  • expensive
  • countries
  • financial information
  • average
  • prices
  • GDP per capita
  • income
  • data
  • currency
  • fluctuate
  • factors
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
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