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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Sciences and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views.

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Although
 the majority of
people
 agree that
History
 is a significant subject for who would be learned at school.
Moreover
, there is a number of
people
 who disagree with
this
 opinion
due to
 in
this
 century no matter what subject that important more Science and technology. In
this
 essay, I am going to examine
this
 question from both views and give my opinion to discuss the matter. On the other side of the argument, there is a variety of reasons why
History
 subject still important for those who will be able to an excellent
people
.
For example
, you might learn whatever is easily learned from
history
 and
then
 improve for suitable current.
Nevertheless
, anything has a background inside that. If you realize and perceive , you can understand and move forward efficiently more than you did not know anything before. These are reasons why
people
 believe that.
On the other hand
, some
people
 may argue that Sciences and Technology are the most important subjects in the future, as you know, Historians told that humanity became a civilisation that has been background in Science and Technology so you can communicate with those who have been in opposite side in the world by you press one click on your telephone. There are many benefits that make you comfortable. For the reasons mentioned above, I personally believe that whether
History
 or Science that important for some
people
 and maybe not important for some
people
 in society. In my opinion , both sides of the argument have merits , you must realize and believe in whatever can make benefit you.
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