In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion?
The convenience of fast
food
to consume and Use synonyms
it's
affordable prices have Correct your spelling
its
lead
to the rise of patients diagnosed with Wrong verb form
led
health
issues Use synonyms
due to
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high
fast Correct article usage
the high
food
consumption rate in some countries. Use synonyms
Although
if Linking Words
this
is not stopped there will be a surge of patients with Linking Words
health
problems Use synonyms
due to
overconsumption of fast Linking Words
food
, I do not agree Use synonyms
on
altering the tax rate for fast Change preposition
with
food
as a solution for Use synonyms
this
condition.
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lead
to the Change the verb form
leads
health
issues caused by fast Use synonyms
food
is Use synonyms
due to
the overconsumption and lack of self-restraint of some people. Usually, many of them overconsume because they like the taste as the Linking Words
food
is usually loaded with salt and sugar. Use synonyms
This
will lead to an unbalanced nutrition intake Linking Words
especially
for sodium and sugar which causes Add the comma(s)
,especially
the
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apply
health
issues if consumed without proper portioning.
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On the other hand
, the distinctive aspect of fast Linking Words
food
is its affordable price which Use synonyms
also
enables someone to buy the Linking Words
food
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at
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in
a
large Correct article usage
apply
quantity
. Fix the agreement mistake
quantities
Although
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this
is Linking Words
also
why many less affluent Linking Words
household
will rely on fast Fix the agreement mistake
households
food
as their main source of Use synonyms
meal
other than cheap canned goods. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
Hence
, the main reason Linking Words
of
why I disagree Change preposition
apply
on
altering the tax for fast Change preposition
with
food
. Anyone who eats fast Use synonyms
food
just because they like the taste will still keep buying them for any price given Use synonyms
while
some poor families will suffer as their main source of Linking Words
food
will be too expensive for them to afford.
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To conclude
, just because some Linking Words
group
of people are not able to control their appetite for fast Fix the agreement mistake
groups
food
does not mean that it can simply be solved by Use synonyms
rising
the taxes. Fast Correct your spelling
raising
food
does not just cater to those who like the taste but Use synonyms
also
to the poor family who only can afford them other than getting Linking Words
source
of Add an article
the source
a source
food
from canned meals. Use synonyms
This
shows how there is a need for Linking Words
the
governments to come up with other solutions on controlling Correct article usage
apply
the
fast Correct article usage
apply
food
consumption so that everyone can eat fast Use synonyms
food
in moderation.Use synonyms
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