Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Animal testing has been in practice for decades. Even though it's ethically questionable, it has played an irreplaceable role in many scientific discoveries. With the emergence of modern
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animals
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at that time, when only a painful surgical intervention could save the life of a person. Use synonyms
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, if we go back in time and ruminate about the contribution of animal testing in the field of medicine we will be able to justify it in some cases. In many Linking Words
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animals
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animals
makes the process fruitless. The most popular and accurate alternative is human volunteers.
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modelling are advanced computer modelling are reliable methods.
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