Too much money is wasted on repairing old buildings that should be used to knock them down and build new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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funds

is

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wasted on

maintenancing

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maintenance

historic

buildings

that should be demolished and replaced with new ones. I totally disagree with

this

statement because old

buildings

plays

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a key role in protecting our heritage, and it have a positive

impacts

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in

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economy

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of countries.

To begin

with, there are several reasons why I believe that

governments

should

preserving

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historic

buildings

. The primary reason historic

buildings

play a significant role to educate

people

about the past.

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is because the old

buildings

express

about

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out

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heritage and traditions , which

this

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buildings

can help to maintain cultural diversity

around

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worldwide.

Furthermore

, old

buildings

can help to

boosts

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history lessons

on

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the school.

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, the school can organize activities for students to visit these

buildings

in order to have students to better understand

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history classes .

Tourism

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industry is another reason why should

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governments

protect

the

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old

buildings

. To illustrate, historic

buildings

is

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considered

is

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tourists attraction places.

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is

due to

the fact that

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tourists prefer to visit these

buildings

in order to learn about new culture and see how the

people

in the past lived.

Therefore

,

this

can enhance the economy of countries through create jobs opportunity and income for local

people

.

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,

thousand

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of employees will work as

guided

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tour

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,

drivers

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for tourists, and

then

the

goverments

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government

governments

can earn more taxes from

people

,

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this

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funds to improve other sectors, education, healthcare,

roads

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. In conclusion, In my perspective,

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governments

should protect

the

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historic

buildings

, because

it

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enhance cultural diversity,

generate

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source

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income

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for individuals and

governments

via

tourism

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the tourism

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industry.