The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram shows how
energy
is produced by
water
waves when installed in
water
bodies.
Overall
, the first diagram is about how
energy
is generated and the other diagram shows the locations to install
this
machine
based on the necessity of
energy
. The
machine
consists of two chambers where
water
enters through the bottom
chamber
whereas
, the turbine is presented at the top of the first
chamber
. When the
machine
is fitted with a
water
reservoir,
water
enters into the
chamber
of the
machine
through the backside from the space provides at the bottom. After the
water
reaches a certain level, the air flows through a small passage into another
chamber
where it rotates turbines to generate electricity and
subsequently
leaves the
machine
from the space available at the top. On the top of the
machine
, air flows through another passage which again rotates turbines and is
subsequently
released into the
water
. As the generation of
energy
depends on
water
waves, the
machine
is
accordingly
placed. If the
energy
requirement is high, the
machine
is placed away from the land into the
water
which requires a higher cost. Certainly, if the requirement is less the
machine
is set
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in at
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at
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a
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coastal area.
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