The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The chart illustrates the steps of recycling
of
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apply
plastic
bottles from start to end.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are 9 stages of recycling
process beginning Correct article usage
the recycling
from
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with
employee
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employees
collect
the garbage of Wrong verb form
collecting
plastic
from container
and the final Fix the agreement mistake
containers
stage
to convert
the Change the verb form
converting
plastic
waste
to raw materials.
To begin
with
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,with
with
recycling process, the first Remove the redundancy
apply
stage
worker collect
the Correct subject-verb agreement
collects
plastic
waste
from the container. Secondly
, the worker put the plastic
waste
into the truck in order
to ship to
the recycling Correct pronoun usage
it to
center
. The next step, Change the spelling
centre
the
Add a missing verb
is the
employee
work in Change noun form
employee's
order
to sort plastic
waste
. After that, all plastic
waste
comperssing
into one Correct your spelling
compressing
blocks
. The fifth Fix the agreement mistake
block
stage
, the
Add a missing verb
is the
plastics
blocks put on Change the noun form
plastic
machine
in Correct article usage
the machine
order
to crush and then
convert it to grains and wash this
grains.
Correct determiner usage
these
Futhermore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
the
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in the
six
step, the plastics grains enter in Replace the word
sixth
order
to produce the plastic
pellets. The
next step, the pellets enter Change preposition
In the
heating
process to transfer Add an article
the heating
a heating
it
to raw material. The Correct pronoun usage
apply
eight
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eight-stage
stage
raw material Add a missing verb
is already
already
to use again. Replace the word
all ready
Finally
, the the
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apply
recycle
Wrong verb form
recycled
plastic
will become ready to use in different froms
for expect customers.Correct your spelling
forms
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