The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The chart illustrates the steps of recycling

of

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plastic

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bottles from start to end.

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,

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there are 9 stages of

recycling

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process beginning

from

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employee

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employees

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collect

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the garbage of

plastic

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from

container

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and the final

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to convert

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the

plastic

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waste

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to raw materials.

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with

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with

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recycling process, the first

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worker

collect

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the

plastic

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waste

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from the container.

Secondly

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, the worker put the

plastic

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waste

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into the truck in

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to ship

to

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the recycling

center

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. The next step,

the

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employee

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work in

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to sort

plastic

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waste

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. After that, all

plastic

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waste

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comperssing

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compressing

into one

blocks

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. The fifth

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,

the

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plastics

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plastic

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blocks put on

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in

order

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to crush and

then

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convert it to grains and wash

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this

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grains.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

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six

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step, the plastics grains enter in

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to produce the

plastic

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pellets.

The

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next step, the pellets enter

heating

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the heating

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process to transfer

it

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to raw material. The

eight

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stage

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raw material

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already

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to use again.

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, the

the

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recycle

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recycled

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plastic

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will become ready to use in different

froms

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forms

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