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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only langusge to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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The English
language
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 is going to be the majority
language
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 in the world
due to
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 tourism development, and many
people
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 consider that it is possible to use English as the
one
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 global
language
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. There are some benefits from that, which can help to increase equality and incline the global economy,
whereas
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 there will
also
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 be some drawbacks. On the
one
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 hand, in terms of opportunities, if everyone speaks
one
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language
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, it will bring equality for all the
people
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 and nations in the world, resulting in increasing the global economy.
In other words
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, to expand their business or to get some amount of funding, they need to be able to communicate clearly.
For instance
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,
people
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 who live in developing countries can apply for jobs or find investors who are available in other countries without needing to be worried about
language
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 barriers.
On the other hand
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, there are obvious disadvantages to having only
one
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 global
language
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.
Firstly
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,
language
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 is part of
one
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country
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's culture, which has only
one
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language
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 in all the nations may vanish the uniqueness of the
country
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.
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, it can make a
country
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 less interesting, especially for their tourism activity because culture is
one
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 of the tourist attractions that make
people
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 willing to learn and explore from
one
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country
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 to another
country
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.
Thus
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, it may reduce the amount of income that comes from the tourism sector. In conclusion,
while
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 there are plus points to having
one
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 global
language
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, maintaining the local
language
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 as a culture should be prioritized to prevent the endangered of that for future generations.
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