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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel

#hotel #home #papers
Dear
madam
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Madam
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/Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to notify you that I attend a meeting in your hotel 'Taj' on 24th of May. A meeting was organized in one of
huge
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 halls; I sat right side on
5th
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the 5th
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 chair and I vividly remember I kept my key
doucuments
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documents
on
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beside
chair
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the chair
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 , which I forgot there. That
documents
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 is extremely salient
for
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to
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 me. All the documents- a passport,
driviung
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driving
 licence including my graduation degree, were packed in
brown
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a brown
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 bag. I am joining a new job soon ,
prior
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and prior
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 to joining I will have to show my
orignal
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original
 documents to my HR team. without these
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documents
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document
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,document
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 I can't start my job. It is
humble
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a humble
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 request to you,
look
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 for my document in your hotel. If you find my documents please contact me on my Phone (4567899876) or email me (gvbcvukjl). I would pick up my document personally
in
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at
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earliest
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the earliest
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 time. I am appreciating your assistance !
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