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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is debated that individuals' personality and behaviour is shaped by the impact of
culture
,
while
 others consider that has
a
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little
affect
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 on
people
. Humans develop character with inherent personality,
however
, the
enviornment
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environment
 around them would change the way
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how
people
 behave.
This
 statement will discuss why regional
culture
 has a vital impact on humans. We can see that different countries around the world have
distinguish
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the way
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way
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ways
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 of life. Particularly, the
mind-set
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mindset
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 and
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 of individuals from
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the west
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west
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 and east regions are not similar.
For instance
, in Japan, children are not taught to express their opinions in a conversation that might offend
others
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 feelings.
On the other hand
, developing self-intrinsic has an imperative role in America, as it encourages
youngster
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 to develop critical thinking.
Moreover
, it is able to define the country from
daily
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the daily
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behaviuor
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behaviour
od
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of
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people
.
For example
, shoes
are not allow
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 in
Asian's
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house
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houses
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. In
western
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culture
,
people
 would wear their shoes inside the house,
while
 Asian has a restricted
no shoes
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 policy
indoor
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.
However
,
oppenent
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opponent
opponents
 may
agure
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agree
argue
 the
peopele
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people
 are born with
strong
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a strong
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 different personality that would not change by the
culture
. Introvert is not willing to
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to
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 anyone, in spite of
the
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 peer or parent
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 them to show their feelings. In conclusion, there are many factors
have
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an
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 significant impact on the development of
people
 by
culture
.
Public
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 could distinguish
people
 from different countries by
the
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 particular lifestyle.
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