The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
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The illustration shows the 2 new possible sites for a school in Canterbury.
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, the first
site
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is to be located in the countryside
area
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,
while
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the second
site
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is anticipated to be in the
town
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. Both sites can be accessed by main roads.
First,
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the
town
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of Canterbury has 3 parts consisting of the
town
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centre
area
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, the housing
area
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surrounding the centre, and the countryside
area
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in the outermost. The university is located in the north of Canterbury. Interestingly, there is no main
road
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to access the university. The first possible
site
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of the new school is projected to be in the northeast of the
town
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which can be accessed by the main
road
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.
This
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site
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is close to the Sturry with a distance of 5 kilometres with a population of 7,000 which is higher than Chartham's.
Next,
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the second
site
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is planned to be in the
town
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centre where the same main
road
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runs
pass
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. The campus is in a no-traffic zone, so cars are not allowed in the
area
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.
This
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campus is near the residential
area
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, and the main
road
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in
this
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area
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leads to Chartham in the southeast which is 7 kilometres far from the
town
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.
This
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is
further
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than Sturry's distance.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words site, area, town, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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