The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The illustration shows the 2 new possible sites for a school in Canterbury.
Overall
, the first
site
is to be located in the countryside
area
,
while
the second
site
is anticipated to be in the
town
. Both sites can be accessed by main roads.
First,
the
town
of Canterbury has 3 parts consisting of the
town
centre
area
, the housing
area
surrounding the centre, and the countryside
area
in the outermost. The university is located in the north of Canterbury. Interestingly, there is no main
road
to access the university. The first possible
site
of the new school is projected to be in the northeast of the
town
which can be accessed by the main
road
.
This
site
is close to the Sturry with a distance of 5 kilometres with a population of 7,000 which is higher than Chartham's.
Next,
the second
site
is planned to be in the
town
centre where the same main
road
runs
pass
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. The campus is in a no-traffic zone, so cars are not allowed in the
area
.
This
campus is near the residential
area
, and the main
road
in
this
area
leads to Chartham in the southeast which is 7 kilometres far from the
town
.
This
is
further
than Sturry's distance.
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  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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