The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The illustration shows the 2 new possible sites for a school in Canterbury.
Overall
, the first site
is to be located in the countryside area
, while
the second site
is anticipated to be in the town
. Both sites can be accessed by main roads.
First,
the town
of Canterbury has 3 parts consisting of the town
centre area
, the housing area
surrounding the centre, and the countryside area
in the outermost. The university is located in the north of Canterbury. Interestingly, there is no main road
to access the university.
The first possible site
of the new school is projected to be in the northeast of the town
which can be accessed by the main road
. This
site
is close to the Sturry with a distance of 5 kilometres with a population of 7,000 which is higher than Chartham's.
Next,
the second site
is planned to be in the town
centre where the same main road
runs pass
. The campus is in a no-traffic zone, so cars are not allowed in the Correct your spelling
past
area
. This
campus is near the residential area
, and the main road
in this
area
leads to Chartham in the southeast which is 7 kilometres far from the town
. This
is further
than Sturry's distance.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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