The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The line chart illustrates the
number
of tourists visiting Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017 with a comparison between the total
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships and the sum of tourists who stay on the island.
Overall
, it was apparent from the graph that there was a gradual increase in the total
number
of guests from the mentioned timeframe.
While
the
number
of
visitors
staying on the water accommodation was rising steadily, the travellers who stayed on the land reached a plateau. In 2010, the total
number
of guests on the
cruise
was near zero.
Then
, there was a steady growth since 2012 and it reached its peak at 2
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2017. The
number
of sailing ship
visitors
was contributing to nearly two-thirds of Caribbean Island
visitors
by
then
.
On the other hand
, the total of travellers who choose to stay on the Caribbean ground was three-fold than the
number
of
cruise
passengers in 2010.
Moreover
, it gradually rise between 2011-2013, where it reached its peak at 1.5.
Nonetheless
, when the
number
of
visitors
from 2015-2017 remained flat, it crossed with the
number
of
cruise
guests.
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