The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The line chart illustrates the
number
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of tourists visiting Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017 with a comparison between the total
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of
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships and the sum of tourists who stay on the island.
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, it was apparent from the graph that there was a gradual increase in the total
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of guests from the mentioned timeframe.
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the
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of
visitors
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staying on the water accommodation was rising steadily, the travellers who stayed on the land reached a plateau. In 2010, the total
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of guests on the
cruise
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was near zero.
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, there was a steady growth since 2012 and it reached its peak at 2
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2017. The
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of sailing ship
visitors
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was contributing to nearly two-thirds of Caribbean Island
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by
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.
On the other hand
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, the total of travellers who choose to stay on the Caribbean ground was three-fold than the
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of
cruise
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passengers in 2010.
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, it gradually rise between 2011-2013, where it reached its peak at 1.5.
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, when the
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of
visitors
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from 2015-2017 remained flat, it crossed with the
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of
cruise
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guests.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, cruise with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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