Plastic bags are use widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people support the argument that plastics bag should not be allowed to be used anywhere
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the negative effects that they cause on the environment. I totally agree with
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idea for some reasons. In the first point,
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the fact that plastics products are non-biodegradable, they will never disappear but gradually dispose of their chemical poisonous like polyamine or vinylic into the environment which could make harm the soil and air. Since people always littering in the streets with
plastic
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packaging of food and drink, in the long term
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debris would get deep into the land, damage the
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ground’s health and lead to many dangerous soil problems like erosion or drought.
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recent research from Havard University,
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bags accounted for 70% of the causes of temperature rising in the earth.
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, the cleanliness of the environment could be threatened.
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, Many marine
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lives
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could be endangered by the large amount of unused
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bags on the sea. It can be said that many people are abusing the sea as their own landfills
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dropping many different types of trash including
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into the ocean’s body.
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, the underwater
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would meet a misunderstanding and consider it as their own food to eat.
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,
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can not be disgested in the stomach and get stuck in
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organs, in the long run,
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who ate
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type of trash would lose their
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forever. In 2017, global data has shown that the main reason for the deaths of big sea
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as dolphins or white whales is that they have to consume so much polyamine debris over many years.
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, many innocent marine
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could accidentally be taken because of
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bags. In short, not only does
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debris causes damage to the earth
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it is
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the main culprit of many aquatic
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animals
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animals'
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lives
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.
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, I strongly
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think
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that it has to be banned as soon as
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possible
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Decompose
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Eco-friendly
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental footprint
  • Wildlife conservation
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Mandate
  • Incentives
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