The bar chart below shows spending on different forms of music in America in two years.
The bar chart illustrates changes in the spending of Americans on 5 different
music
channels (Downloads
, Streaming, CD, Synchronisation
Royalties
and Music
Video) over one year (2013-2014).
Overall
, the most striking feature is that in 2014 Americans paid less for all categories, with the exception of Streaming, while
Downloads
still received the most money and Music
Videos the least. Also
, Synchronisation
Royalties
and Music
Videos saw a less significant decrease in absolute values, than Downloads
and CDs.
In 2013, Downloads
dominated the market with 1541 million
dollars
spent on this
category, while
CD stood next at 885 million
dollars
. However
, both these categories dropped significantly to 1300 million
dollars
and 719 million
dollars
, respectively. In contrast
, Streaming stood at 700 million
dollars
occupying the
third place in 2013 but had increased considerably to 860 Correct article usage
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million
dollars
by 2014, reversing positions with CD.
The least popular music
channels in both years were Synchronisation
Royalties
and Music
Video. However
, while
there was a slight decrease in Synchronisation
Royalties
, which dropped from 100 million
dollars
in 2013 to 90 million
dollars
in 2014, Music
Video underwent a more dramatic decrease, with 50 million
dollars
in 2013 dropping to 10 million
dollars
in 2014.Submitted by vlad.chibisov on
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