You have an upcoming meeting with your manager to discuss your performance in the past years. write a letter to the manager. In your letter. Describe your achievements in the past year. Say what areas/skills need to improve on Suggest plan to improve those skills/areas.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Sir, I am writing
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letter regarding my work experience from the
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2 years.
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, I would like to discuss my good work, my weaknesses, and how I can better those in the meeting
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Sunday.
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, I would like to show my achievements, as an accountant, I am able to handle personal tax clients and know how to run the payroll too.
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, I joined some free classes to get education about how to create a financial statement. My co-workers are really happy with my work.
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, I still things that there are some techniques which I need to learn, First and foremost is client interaction, I am not given a chance to communicate with customers.
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, Corporate taxes and T4, are really important to know. I would like to request you to send me a list of courses, which I can join to achieve the skills which I want to possess.
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, I need a training session too. Hopefully, you will consider my request. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Kanchan Bhatia
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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