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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people think that it's the responsibility of
parents
 to groom their
children
 in
such
 a way that they become decent members of
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society
.Contrary to
this
, a fraction of people think
this
 lies within the domain of
school
 and perhaps,
school
 is the right place to master
this
 aptitude.
This
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with
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my idea about the question prompt
Parents
 play a vital role in
upbringing
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the upbringing
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 of their
children
. Kids spend only eight hours in
school
 and
remaining
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the remaining
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 sixteen hours of the day at
home
 with
parents
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their parents
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,
hence
, it is imperative for
parents
 to work on their social skills and teach them good manners which are essential for
development
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the development
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 of
healthy
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a healthy
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society
.
For example
, some
children
 are reluctant to follow rules in schools laid out by their
teacher
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teachers
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, but at
home
, they are much more comfortable
in
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talking to their mothers about every matter.
This
 leads to provocative discussion and
better
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a better
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 understanding of
matter
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matters
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 by youngsters
due to
 emotional attachment.
Children
 are sent to
school
 to acquire skills which they fail to learn at
home
 like punctuality and time management. The environment at the
school
 acts as a catalyst in enhancing
child's
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 capabilities
due to
 his exposure to unseen challenges.
For example
, at
home
,
children
lacks
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 a strict learning environment which is foremost for acquiring knowledge.
School
 introduces
children
 to diverse aspects of
society
, like
it's
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 norms which can ultimately help them in having a respectable place in
society
 I surmise that both
parents
 and
school
plays
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 an important role in developing the personality of
children
 at different times of
day
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the day
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. Every child has a different nature, some are keen on learning in
strict
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a strict
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 environment
while
 others like to have
relaxed
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 one.
To sum up
, both have to contribute
in
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to
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 raising
children
 which can
further
 upgrade
society
's norms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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