The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information show below.

The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information show below.
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Overall
, the areas of motivation that people have to pursue higher education is shown in the line graph and the pie chart represents the tuition fees that should be funded for each course. At first glance, it can be observed in the bar graph that the most popular reasons to study are the interest in the subject and to gain qualifications respectively.
However
, the least famous reason is to meet people and to be able to change jobs with nine and twelve per cent respectively.
Further
, there is a similar percentage of the population who studied because they think it is helpful for their current job, it improves prospects of promotion and
also
they enjoy learning.
Moreover
, the pie chart displays the highest proportion of the bill should be paid by individuals and the least amount should be paid by the taxpayer
that is
, forty and twenty-five per cent respectively.
Also
, the employer should contribute thirty-five per cent for each course.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • respondents
  • motivation
  • percentage
  • cost distribution
  • financial responsibility
  • education funding
  • pie chart
  • bar chart
  • data
  • subsidize
  • self-improvement
  • career advancement
  • personal interest
  • allocate
  • tuition
  • public funding
  • private investment
  • retraining
  • lifelong learning
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