Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go on the trip • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of
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letter is to express my interest in going on Linking Words
Canada
trip with my daughter and her classmates.
First and foremost, I have been to Canada more than a few times recently. Correct article usage
a Canada
Due to
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, I had an opportunity to explore its rich culture, food and weather. Linking Words
Besides
that, most of Dhruvi's peers know me very well and I think that they will Linking Words
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enjoy my company.
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In addition
, as I am certified in CPR I can immediately provide first-aid, if required. Beyond that, in the past, I have led many tourist groups who have visited our city, so I have experience in guiding tourists, which could be a great asset for you.
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Moreover
, I would like to know what kind of accommodation will be provided for myself. Linking Words
Last
but not least, please let me know if any additional paperwork is needed in order to accompany the children on the Canadian trip.
Please let me know if you would like to get any additional information.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchin PatelLinking Words
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph revolves around a single idea to enhance clarity.
complete response
Expand on your motivations and any specific skills that make you an ideal candidate for the trip to achieve a more compelling response.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear and polite greeting and closing, which contributes to its overall cohesion.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is appropriate and courteous, suitable for addressing the head teacher.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.