The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

Overall

, the total number of foreigners travelling to the Caribbean island in seven years period from 2010 to 2017 is shown in the line graph. At first glance, it can be clearly observed that the total sum of visitors increased steadily over the period of seven years between 2010 and 2017.

Further

, the sum of guests staying on the islet was raising until 2013.

Then

, it was stable up to 2015. After that, in 2013, the number of visitors decreased by a little. Again, the count of foreigners rose in 2017.

Also

, the sum of people staying on cruise ships had a slight downfall in the year 2012.

However

this

trend changed quickly and increased dramatically over the next five years.

Moreover

, the red dots in the graph represents the tourists staying on cruise ships. The red line displays visitors stopping over an island and the green dash means the total number of foreigners visiting the Caribbean island.

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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?

The most important aim of science should be improve peoples lives . to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Some people think that social media platforms are useful for business and making new friends, while others think that such websites are harmful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.

It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.