The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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