The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The

graph

illustrates the number of

visitors

who stay in two different places in the Caribbean

such

as on

cruise

ships

and islands from 2010 to 2017.

Overall

, in terms of

visitors

on

cruise

ships

, from 2012 to 2017 experienced a significant

increasing

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that is

mean from 2012 which was the least number of

visitors

in the

graph

, was between 0 and 0.5 and the same in 2010, to 2017 was 2 the higher amount of visitor in the island and

also

more that visitor in

cruise

ships

. the visitor on

cruise

ships

all year

was

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more than other

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visitors visitor

, in 2016 and 2017. The

graph

does not have a rapid downward, even though 2016 in

cruise

ship

visitors

and 2012 in island

visitors

are exceptions.

According to

the

visitors

who stay on the island,

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it was rising slightly, there was a lot of stability and the same average. For ,instance the years 2013, 2014, 2015 and 2017 were 1.5 and

also

in the prime years like 2010 and 2011 was almost 1.6. In the ,

graph

we can see the one line that has a sharply grown, that line is the total of

visitors

. In

this

line is the number of both groups, for more explanation

this

, both have developed but in 2015 and 2016 nothing changed and they were near 2.8.