Research into new medicines and treatments is essential. Should this research be paid for by private companies or by the government?

Opinions are divided on whether the fact that cost of

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into new medicines and

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should be paid by

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or by the

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government

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expense should be paid by the

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government

. Medical

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is sponsored by private

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, patients would have to suffer from the increased price of medicines and

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research

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requires the funders to cover various expenses,

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as buying equipment or hiring staff.

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, most

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often see money as one of their primary objectives, so they would have to make sure their revenues are high enough to prevent losses and stay profitable. Some profit-oriented

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may even make researchers set a higher price for their

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outcomes to maximize their earnings.

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, medicine products

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medical

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would be more expensive for patients to afford, and those who are impoverished would be more likely to succumb to their disease.

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, others

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that there are several reasons why it can be argued that government should spend money on tackling the causes of diseases.

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, Cost-effectiveness is the key element when placing more importance on these initiatives.

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, by allowing people to have access to these health monitoring strategies, governments can avoid the

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or other extravagantly expensive medicines. In

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way, not only the financial pressure on

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departments can be reduced, but

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the painful suffering caused by these contagious sicknesses.

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In conclusion

, to bring the best thing to people, the cost of the

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should be paid by the

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government

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curb and choose the best price for

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