The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The pictures illustrate an industrialized zone in Norbition City and its future redevelopment scheme.
Overall
, the plan will transform the city from an industrial zone into a resident area supported by housing and serval public services.
According to
the maps, factories around the central roundabout and either of the eastern street will be demolished and replaced by housing and other facilities. Shops and a hospital will be built near the south corner of the original roundabout,
while
there will be a school
at the end
of the east road with a park at the middle top side.
Moreover
, a new street will be paved towards the northeast of the town square with houses along it.
In addition
, a second roundabout will be constructed on the southern highway connected to Norbtion.
Furthermore
, there will be a bridge crossing a river to the other side with accommodations alongside, causing farmland to move east.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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