Some
people
suggest that it is a personal responsibility to stay happy
while
others argue that it
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on external factors. I would say that to become happy is our own choice
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others.
On the one hand,
people
consider doing their favourite activities in order to maintain their emotions, especially when they feel anxious or
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cramped week. There are several activities
people
do in order to keep themselves
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happy
such
as singing, playing games, doing
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, dancing or
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favourite food. Take singing
for example
, it become
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easier nowadays to do karaoke using
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platform on a mobile phone or computer
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independently. It
also
has a specific feature which is choosing partners from different countries to play
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together.
Thus
, when
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are in bad
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they simply can do
such
a simple thing
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that to manage their feelings.
On the other hand
, there are some
people
who have a tendency to feel happy just because of what happens around them. They have a tendency
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on other
people
or even the weather.
For instance
, there is a study conducted on employees to measure their productivity during rainy days, and the results show that productivity is much lower than the sunny days.
Thus
, the weather really affects
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, particularly when the feelings of
people
depend on the weather.
To conclude
,
although
some external factors could affect
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, I believe that
people
themselves know exactly how to deal with their own self.
Therefore
, maintaining emotion to stay happy is a personal responsibility.