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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is commonly believed that the development of imagination or language skills can be possessed through the act of reading
books
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 rather than watching
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. Personally, I am in complete agreement with
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 notion. On the one hand, the encouragement of forming better imaginary skills can be observed from the
readers
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 than
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 watchers because of the freedom of imagining. Indeed,
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 individuals are watching
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tv
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, they obtain information effortlessly through their visual and auditory, and it doesn’t foster the
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 of images from the watchers when their view toward objectives is restricted by images shown on
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.
In contrast
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,
books
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 convey
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 by describing all of the surroundings and
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 through the
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 of
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. When people read
books
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,
readers
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 have to
use
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 their imaginations to visualize the
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 of the
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 to understand the views of the authors.
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, they can
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 vivid surroundings just by reading
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.
This
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 can be exemplified by the details of the window in
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, if it isn’t described any
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,
readers
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 can imagine that windows in any shape that pleases their contentment,
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 of just the usual square windows shown on televisions.
On the other hand
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, the ability to
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 languages can be enhanced profoundly for the reader thanks to the sophisticated
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 of languages shown in every
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 of each book.
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 actions and surroundings are displayed directly through the images and auditory,
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sometimes,
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 can be ignored easily by the watchers when those details don’t make any impact or no need to describe
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 thoroughly. These aspects are often emphasized in book
contents
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 by the
use
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 of
words
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. Not only these details can be memorable to the
readers
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 but, they can
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 foster the development of using
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 for the
readers
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 when
readers
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 can now acquire insightful knowledge and
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 used by authors which makes the story lively.
Therefore
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, the range of vocabulary and the methods of using
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 are tremendously enhanced for
readers
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. In conclusion, reading
books
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help
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users develop both imagination and language skills significantly when the
contents
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 shown in
books
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 don’t impose any constraints on the individual’s mind but
also
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 help
readers
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 learn the technique of using
words
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 sophisticatedly.
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