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Nowadays, an increasing number of young people display anti-social behavior and a lack of respect for others. What are the causes of this problem? Can you suggest any solution?

#people #display #behavior #lack #respect
It is true that younger generations these days show anti-social
behavior
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 and respect for
others
. The reason young people do
that is
 from internal sources and external factors.
As a result
,
this
 is a serious problem which should have a solution to attack it. (3 paragraph) The
parents
 have an opportunity for their children
such
 as teens.
This
 factor comes from an internal source that
parents
 should give freedom
for
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 their children to allow them to
interaction
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,
have
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 social experiences with
others
.
Parents
 sometimes limit friendship or contact, so that they are still at home.
For example
, when they need to make a group discussion or time to expand with their community outside
such
 as from university or school.
Therefore
, they lack social experience and lose
respect
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with
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others
.
Parents
 should give free space to their
child
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 to interact with
others
 to build their
behavior
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. (5 paragraph) Surroundings of the younger generation have a big
impact
 on their anti-social
behavior
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 and respect too.
This
 part comes from their
friends
 that have a friend who does not give a positive
impact
.
For example
, some
friends
 have a group but not a team to support each other,
such
 as giving evaluations when someone makes a mistake. So, they grow up with a negative
impact
 on their environment with nothing warning.
Friends
 supposed to have a positive
impact
 could build each other to admire each other because part of human life in a day would be with
friends
. (5 paragraph)
Thus
, dealing with
this
 problem, factor external and internal is the solution to
un
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 increase the
youngsters
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number of youngsters
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 that have bad
behavior
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.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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