the chart below shows the sales figures for children's toys in 2012 and 2016 in six different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the information about the
price
of trade for kids
toys during the period from 2012 to 2016. The unit of measurement is in US Change noun form
kids'
kid's
dollars
.
Overall
, the cost of sales of children’s dolls rose steadily over the period, except in Japan
. While
,
the Remove the comma
apply
price
in Japan
remained constant.
As a result
, the cost of toys in the UK was higher in
2012 to 2016. In 2012, the UK got 8 Change preposition
from
billion
dollars
, compared to 2012 at about 6 billion
dollars
. The lowest price
in 2016, is in Japan
and Brazil, both of those at 1 billion
dollars
. While
, in 2012 that the sales were lower in India, almost
0 Change preposition
with almost
billion
sales. However
, India grew in 2016 at
2 Change preposition
to
billion
. In 2012, the highest price
was in the USA at 3 billion
. Followed by Japan
and China at 1 billion
dollars
.
In conclusion, in all different countries
there was a rocket between 2012 and 2016 except Add a comma
,countries
Japan
kept on 1 billion
dollars
.Submitted by gabriellasada24 on
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