The chart below shows the preferred method of communication for 18–30 years old in three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
bart
chart compares the Change the capitalization
Bart
favorite
system of communication for 18 Change the spelling
favourite
until
30 years old between 1996 and 2016. The unit of measurement is in proportion.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, the percentage of landlines rapidly decreased over the period, Linking Words
while
the proportion of mobile Linking Words
phone
or apps and social Fix the agreement mistake
phones
media
rose each time. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
the
mobile phone shows Correct article usage
apply
the
rose significantly Correct article usage
apply
than
Correct word choice
and
the
social Correct article usage
apply
media
was Use synonyms
increase
gradually.
In 1996, approximately 66% Wrong verb form
increased
Change preposition
of landline
landline
was the highest percentage of that method in communication. Fix the agreement mistake
landlines
However
, in 2006 it declined to around 26%Linking Words
,
and plunged to around 5% in 2016. Mobile Remove the comma
apply
phone
or apps climbed significantly Fix the agreement mistake
phones
that
in 1996 Correct word choice
apply
was
around 6% and went up approximately 42%. In 2016 the growth was 62%. The figures for social Unnecessary verb
apply
media
Use synonyms
shows
that in 1996 around 7%, and it went up to about 43% in 2006Correct subject-verb agreement
show
,
and rose near 62%.
Remove the comma
apply
At the end
of the period, the figures that show Linking Words
favorite
methods were mobile phones or apps, followed by social Change the spelling
favourite
media
, and the Use synonyms
last
was Linking Words
Add an article
a landline
landline
.Fix the agreement mistake
landlines
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words media with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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