The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The pie charts provide information on
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expense breakdown in two separate years(1966, and 1996). On the whole, the largest expenditure shifted from
food
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to cars during the period. Looking at the data from 1966, people used to pay 44
percent
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per cent
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of their money on
food
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. The car expenditure followed
food
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by spending 23
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of the total that year. The rest consists of petrol, restaurant, furniture, books, and computers, respectively 9%,7%,10%, and 6%. Turning to the data from 1996, the preference has shifted.
Food
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expenses dramatically dropped to 14%,
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restaurant expenditures doubled. There was a significant increase in car spending to 45%, interestingly, the petrol expense decreased by 1%.
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, American people began spending six
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of their money on computers
instead
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of books.
To conclude
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, American people have changed their spending from
food
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to cars and restaurants.
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