Recently, you saw an article in the newspaper/journal about a city or town. you know andsome of the information in the article was incorrect. write a letter to the editor regarding this: How you know about this city/town What information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Dear Sir, I would like to bring to your attention a few mistakes which I read in the newspaper "Ajj Kal", on page 15 about my city Chandigarh. My name is Kanchan Bhatia, I was brought up in

this

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countryside location

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, there were some statements you wrote that were not based on true history, which I am going to explain.

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, there was a line that it is the capital of Punjab, which is totally incorrect,

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this

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New Delhi is the true answer.

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, an article state that Rock Garden is built by the Government, actually it is created by Nek Chand from waste material.

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, you said that there is no entry fee for

was

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apply

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a rose garden, but basically, they charge 5 Indian rupees. I would like to request to post a new report in a few days after having

research

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researched

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. My main reason behind

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letter is to spread exact knowledge because you are one of the best news editors in our area. Hopefully, you will pay attention to my concern and will print a mistake-free story about my living place

Chandigarh

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in Chandigarh

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. Yours sincerely, Kanchan Bhatia

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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192 words

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