You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: - Why you are writing - What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together - Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Sandip, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am penning

this

letter to know out what you have been doing since we

last

met and inform you about the possessions that you left at my home when we all met for my birthday party. Since we met

last

time, I have been very busy with my part-time job

as well as

I have been preparing for my MS degree. As I just completed my final examination, I thought to tidy up some stuff and that led me to your belongings which you forgot to collect from my home. Having said that, you have left a couple of your personal things and I apologize for not sending you back earlier. One is your silver-coated bracelet which you always wear and it is your lucky charm. Another is the woofer system that you brought up, especially for my birthday celebrations.

Moreover

, I am sure you will require these things so kindly let me know how I can send you these two things safely. Looking forward to hearing you. Regards, Mohawk

Submitted by MT on Sat Jul 01 2023

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

180 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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