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You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: - Why you are writing - What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together - Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Sandip, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am penning
this
 letter to know out what you have been doing since we
last
 met and inform you about the possessions that you left at my home when we all met for my birthday party. Since we met
last
 time, I have been very busy with my part-time job
as well as
 I have been preparing for my MS degree. As I just completed my final examination, I thought to tidy up some stuff and that led me to your belongings which you forgot to collect from my home. Having said that, you have left a couple of your personal things and I apologize for not sending you back earlier. One is your silver-coated bracelet which you always wear and it is your lucky charm. Another is the woofer system that you brought up, especially for my birthday celebrations.
Moreover
, I am sure you will require these things so kindly let me know how I can send you these two things safely. Looking forward to hearing you. Regards, Mohawk
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