In many countries paying for things using mobile phones (cell phone ) apps is becoming incresingly common . Does this development have more advantages or disavantages ?

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folk prefer to pay for things by mobile phones application

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the number of commute

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their bills easily from their accommodation

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research in India, the amount of traffic congestion drop off because most

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people are willing to stay at home and complete their payments from their residences.

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, from the environmental viewpoint, the amount of exhaust gas and fossil fuel decline significantly in the long run.

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, most of the older generation are unable to use that equipment as

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they don’t have enough knowledge for paying with in

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, there are several developing countries which do not have a basic infrastructure

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, in some parts of India, some citizens are unable to success the internet.

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, the administration authorities consider several security layouts

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prevent criminal behaviour ,

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there are plenty of cyber crimes

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statistics in the UK, there are more than 10000 hacks per month

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some of them were successful. In conclusion,

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paying things by apps,

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essential infrastructure, we must prevent the consumption of them