A lot of old people are suffering from loneliness these days. They also lack physical fitness. What do you think are the reasons for this problem? Can you think of possible solutions?
In
this
technical era, a large segment of grey-haired individuals is suffering from isolation Linking Words
along with
a dearth of healthiness.I aim to discuss the rationales which surg Linking Words
this
problem Linking Words
as well as
some possible solutions to mitigate Linking Words
this
scenario.
Embarking on the predominant reason why the golden-ager society is going through loneliness.Linking Words
This
is the hectic schedule of their juveniles.To justify,either Linking Words
due to
workaholic pressure or the burden of study,no valuable time is devoted by the children to their parents and grandparents.Linking Words
Hence
, they are left alone within the four walls of their adobe.Linking Words
Besides
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this
,owing to old age,they avoid going outside Linking Words
such
as in parks and restaurants.They neither do walking nor exercise,which eventually makes them couch potatoes,Linking Words
moreover
after , the 50s the immune system starts to Linking Words
get
Verb problem
apply
weakens
and the body becomes weak as well.Wrong verb form
weaken
As a result
,because of a dearth of movements ,they become unhealthy.
Despite the aforementioned reasons,first and the foremost panacea to tackle Linking Words
this
notion is that teenagers should live with their parents so that they can interact with them Linking Words
together with
look after them for their needs.Linking Words
For example
in India,children never Linking Words
left
their parents and shift to another home whether for work or study.Ergo,the elderly people stay happy and healthy.Wrong verb form
leave
Apart from
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this
,the pensioners ought to be motivated to participate in health camps and do exercise.Linking Words
Furthermore
,the Linking Words
elder
ones should intake a healthy diet which must include healthy things like fruits,vegetables and pulses to keep themselves fit and fine.Replace the word
elderly
Consequently
,the elder residents can lead to a healthy and happy life.
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To conclude
,Linking Words
although
owing to lack of interaction with others including the dearth of exercise grey-haired people feel a sense of isolation and weakness,I believe that they can lead to mental and physical soundness provided that they intake a balanced diet and their juveniles would look after them.Linking Words
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