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The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of urban residents in four countries in Asia over a 50-year period, between 1970 and 2020 with anticipations for 2030 and 2040.
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, what stands out from the graph is that the percentage of the crowd in all countries witnessed an increase by the end of the period and there will be a continuous trend in 2030 and 2040. Regarding Malaysia and Indonesia, there will be a dramatic growth in the percentage of the population, the former will soar by almost 52% and the latter will experience a substantial growth by roughly 32% by the end of the duration.
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, the number of people who are living in Malaysia will be the most at 85% in 2040. As for
Philippines
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 and Thailand, the former fluctuates during the period.
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, at
first,
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the number of its residents was the most, its figure will increase to approximately 58% in 2040. The latter will grow gradually, starting at 18% to reach its peak of 50% in the future.
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, Thailand maintained the same level at roughly 30% between 1990 and 2020.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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