some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think that

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transport should be limited because it

cause

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severe environmental issues. I totally disagree with

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statement because

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flights can have

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negative impacts on people living standards

as well as

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of

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.

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with, there are several reasons why I believe that

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air

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can have detrimental consequences.

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,

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air

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travel

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can

leads

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to social problems

such

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as crime.

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is because

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most

of

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products and food ship from

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one country

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to another using

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plane

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planes

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, and

then

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restrict

air

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travel

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can contribute to

increase

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the

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price of goods.

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, people maybe cannot

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increase in their

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needs, and

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they turn to

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a crime

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crime

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to order to meet their

families

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family's

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responsibilities. Economy issues

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another

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negative

outcomes

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of controlled

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transport. To illustrate, many countries around the world rely on

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industry

is

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as

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the

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main source of income , which means

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travel

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can leads decline

the

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number of tourists, and

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the countries can face

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an economic

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crisis.

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,

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flights can

leads

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lead

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to the

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the

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a

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reduce

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the

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number of commuters who

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.

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,the

airlines

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companies lose a lot of profits, which

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can

harmful

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to

national

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econmoic

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economy

.

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, I would like to

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suggest

some measures to mitigate

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pollution

instead

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of

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restricting

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the

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air

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travelling namely

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encouraging

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airlines

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companies to use eco-friendly

fuel

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fuels

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such

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as solar,

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and wind

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, which

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source can contribute to reduce the Co2 emission, and

then

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will minimize

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global warming and climate change. In conclusion, I

strognly

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strongly

disagree with

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limit

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limiting

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the

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apply

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air

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travel

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,

bucause

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because

it

create

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creates

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social and

economy

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problems ,

however

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, I recommend

the

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that

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governments could incentivize

airlines

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companies to

utillze

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utilise

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renewable energy source rather

fossil

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than fossil

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fuel in order to reduce

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contamination.