some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals think that
air
transport should be limited because it cause
severe environmental issues. I totally disagree with Change the verb form
causes
this
statement because restrict
flights can have Wrong verb form
restricting
a
negative impacts on people living standards Correct article usage
apply
as well as
economy
of Add an article
the economy
country
.
Add an article
the country
a country
To begin
with, there are several reasons why I believe that limit
Wrong verb form
limiting
air
travel
can have detrimental consequences. Firstly
, restrict
Wrong verb form
restricting
air
travel
can leads
to social problems Wrong verb form
lead
such
as crime. This
is because the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
products and food ship from Change preposition
apply
country
to another using Correct pronoun usage
one country
air
plane
, and Fix the agreement mistake
planes
then
restrict air
travel
can contribute to increase
Correct article usage
an increase
the
price of goods. Change preposition
in the
Therefore
, people maybe cannot affordable
Replace the word
afford
this
increase in their basics
needs, and Change the noun form
basic
then
they turn to commit
Wrong verb form
committing
Add an article
a crime
crime
to order to meet their Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
families
responsibilities.
Economy issues Change noun form
family's
families'
is
another Correct subject-verb agreement
are
a
negative Correct article usage
apply
outcomes
of controlled Fix the agreement mistake
outcome
air
transport. To illustrate, many countries around the world rely on tourism
industry Add an article
the tourism
is
Correct your spelling
as
the
main source of income , which means Change the word
their
limit
Wrong verb form
limiting
air
travel
can leads decline the
number of tourists, and Change preposition
in the
then
the countries can face economic
crisis. Correct article usage
an economic
Moreover
, limit
flights can Wrong verb form
limiting
leads
Change the verb form
lead
Change preposition
to the
the
Correct article usage
a
reduce
Replace the word
reduction
the
number of commuters who Change preposition
in the
flight
. Replace the word
fly
As a result
,the airlines
companies lose a lot of profits, which Change the noun form
airline
this
can Correct pronoun usage
apply
harmful
to Add a missing verb
be harmful
national
Correct article usage
the national
econmoic
. Correct your spelling
economy
Finally
, I would like to sugget
some measures to mitigate Correct your spelling
suggest
air
pollution instead
of restrict
Wrong verb form
restricting
the
Correct article usage
apply
air
travelling namely encourage
Wrong verb form
encouraging
airlines
companies to use eco-friendly Change the noun form
airline
fuel
Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
such
as solar, wind
, which Correct word choice
and wind
this
source can contribute to reduce the Co2 emission, and then
will minimize the
global warming and climate change.
In conclusion, I Correct article usage
apply
strognly
disagree with Correct your spelling
strongly
limit
Wrong verb form
limiting
the
Correct article usage
apply
air
travel
, bucause
it Correct your spelling
because
create
social and Change the verb form
creates
economy
problems ,Replace the word
economic
however
, I recommend the
governments could incentivize Correct your spelling
that
airlines
companies to Change the noun form
airline
utillze
Correct your spelling
utilise
the
renewable energy source rather Correct article usage
apply
fossil
fuel in order to reduce Correct word choice
than fossil
air
contamination.Submitted by faiz3177 on
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