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The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online?What could be done to control information online? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The internet has been a good place to seek
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and has provided individuals with many opportunities from around the world. The following essay will discuss that not all
information
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internet
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 is trustworthy and federal
supervision
 is required to prevent fake
information
 from spreading online. There are a number of sources
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internet
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 an individual can find
information
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, but a few things should be noted before consuming any
information
 found online. There are a lot of
people
 that write false
information
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 sites which can have a few reasons for
such
action
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. These
people
 are either misleaders, or
in other words
, desire to make
people
 fall for their fake
information
 because it would be for their advantage or, these individuals have been falsely informed and without researching the consumed
information
, they write it right away in
intemet
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internet
. There are a few ways to control the posted
information
 online. One of these ways is federal
supervision
. The
government related
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 agencies should have the
information
 posted
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 different sites under
supervision
,
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 so that whenever there is
a false
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information
 posted
in
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 a particular site, they can block
people
's access to it. Another way to prevent fake
news
 from spreading in
people
's
feed
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 is
people
's actions themselves. Anyone who finds
an
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information
 online must research it
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 different sites, preferably official ones, and watch the
news
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 official
news
 channels.
To conclude
, not every
information
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sough
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 online is reliable and
government's
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supervision
 should be provided to block
people
's access to false
news
 posted online. Individuals' research on
a certain
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information
 is
also
 recommended
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • accessibility
  • credibility
  • regulation
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • biased reporting
  • public opinion
  • fact-checking
  • curate
  • digital literacy
  • discern
  • censorship
  • free speech
  • integrity
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