You organised a birthday party at your place and borrowed something from your friend for the same. But it was damaged at the party. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, describe what it was how it was damaged what you will do about it

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Dear John, First of all, thank you for lending me the woofer speaker which I requested to borrow for my birthday celebration, needless to say, it was a great help from you. By the way, we all missed your presence at the party but I got to know from our common friend Rohan that you're suffering from a viral infection. I am praying for your speedy recovery. Having said that, your sound system was amazing, and because of that all the guests enjoyed the party, and shake their bodies on the dance floor.

However

, when our mates were bringing it down from the 1st floor after the party, unfortunately, it slipped from one of my friends.

As a result

, the system is broken in multiple parts, and it seems beyond repair. Because of

this

incident, I would like to apologize, and I would like to compensate with a new one. But I do not know if the same brand of music player is available in the market, and no idea about your choices as well.

For

this

reason, if you can come up with me to the ISCON mall next Sunday, I want you to buy a new system of your choice, and of course, it would be completely paid for by me. Looking forward to hearing you about your health improvements and next availability. Yours lovingly, David

Submitted by MT on Sun Jul 02 2023

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